NARRATIVE WRITING
Function: telling about the past event by adding in the conflict and giving the solution or resolution
Tenses:
<!--[if !supportLists]-->1. <!--[endif]-->Past simple (s + verb 2 + o + adv)
<!--[if !supportLists]-->2. <!--[endif]-->Past continuous (s + was/were + verb-ing + o + adv)
<!--[if !supportLists]-->3. <!--[endif]-->Past perfect (s + had + verb 3 + o + adv)
Stages:
<!--[if !supportLists]-->1. <!--[endif]-->Introductory paragraph or orientation. In this stage or paragraph, it concludes the time (when), the setting/place (where), the characters (who), the reasons (why).
<!--[if !supportLists]-->2. <!--[endif]-->Body paragraph or complication. In this stage or paragraph, it concludes the activity or event (what), the conflict or climax.
<!--[if !supportLists]-->3. <!--[endif]-->Concluding paragraph or resolution. In this stage or paragraph, it concludes the way to solve the problem or conflict.
Example:
My Bad Day
It was in the afternoon (when). I was on the way home (where). I was with my school friend, Donny (who). Donny and I were going to my friend’s house, Ika to do the assignment.
We were walking along when we heard the dog barked. The sound was heard more clearly . Then we saw a big dog. We felt scared. The dog stared at us and directly chased us. We ran away and ran toward the big tree. We climbed up the tree. Unfortunately, the dog waited for us right under the tree. We could do nothing. The only thing that we could do was waiting as the dog did. We shouted ‘help’, but nobody heard. It took for hours.
We heard the man shouted ‘Miles’ repetitively. We guessed Miles was the name of the dog. Our guess was right. That man was the master of the dog. The man saw the dog and called it. Finally, the dog walked away. We felt relief. We climbed down the tree. And we ended up to go to Ika’s house since it was too late and we had already been tired waiting for a long time on the tree. It was my bad day that I ever had.
Assignment
Now your turn to write the narrative text by these following titles:
<!--[if !supportLists]-->1. <!--[endif]-->Unforgettable Moment
<!--[if !supportLists]-->2. <!--[endif]-->My bad day
<!--[if !supportLists]-->3. <!--[endif]-->My last vacation
<!--[if !supportLists]-->4. <!--[endif]-->Amusing moment
<!--[if !supportLists]-->5. <!--[endif]-->My fantastic day
NAMA : INES SILVIA
BalasHapusKELAS : XII,SOC,II
My Bad Day
When I woke up on Monday, I was very surprised to see the clock has been demonstrated at 6.30. I quickly got up and shower. After a shower, I eat breakfast, then go to school by public transport. When I get off of public transportation, I opened the bag to take the money. Immediately I remembered that today is Monday. Time carried the flag ceremony. Turns out I forgot to put a cap on the bag. Finally, with confidence, I walked to school.
On arrival at the school, students were already gathered in the field. The ceremony was about to begin. I too hastily ran to the parade ground and the rear berbalis. When the ceremony begins, the principal briefed directly challenge school discipline. Suddenly there came a teacher to check the neatness of his students. And unfortunately, I do not wear hats. Me and my friends who violates the order of march should be separated from students who do not violate the order.
After the ceremony, the children who violate the order should not leave the field. Because it will be punished. We were told to clean up the parade ground. We watched one of my teachers. Half an hour passed, all of a sudden my teacher called us to line up again. It turns out punishment to clean the field has been completed. We feel relieved. I think this sentence has expired. But our teacher added another penalty on us. We were told to make the words "I will not repeat this act again" until 100x. And must be completed at the first break. To my surprise upon hearing those words. In my heart to say that just because a school cap, I am punished like this.
Fortunately, the first lesson because the teacher did not go empty. I memanfaatkanya to write a sentence that is given the task of the teacher. Selasai my job right in the recess. Q gather with friends. I feel relieved. From experience, I always take my hat into the bag
adhitya dwi ananda
BalasHapusXII social 4
Innocent boy and Beautiful girl
One day there was a boy, his named is Roy he lived in the little village named Neverville. Roy had a beautiful neighbor. her name is Agnes. Roy and Agnes was a childhood friend.
Roy was an innocent boy, he never admit that Agnes like him since he helped her 7 years ago. Roy helped Agnes from kidnapper. every time she looked him, Agnes face is blushing red.
One day Roy was getting weird sick Agnes knew that, she tried to find medicine to cure Roy. she asked all best physician on the country. All physician confused about Roy disease. when Agnes went back to go home with hopeless she met old woman. old woman ask Agnes to gave her a food because she very hungry. Agnes give old woman a bag of cup cake. Old woman really thanked about that. then she give a bottle of bright water and said .
"Give this water to your lovely person". on seconds old women gone Agnes really surprised . Agnes go home with big hope, she went to Roy house and give that water to Roy. on next day Roy got healthy ,Roy really happy with happily Roy went to Agnes house and said thanks to Agnes. Roy asked to married with Agnes . Agnes really happy and agreed with Roy offer. they married and life happily ever after.
JUNIAR MUALADI PUJIANTO
BalasHapusXII SOC 3
LIED FOR THE GOD
one day , my mother and i went to dental specialists , and the Doctor was the wife of my brother first, which means that she is my sister in law .
i went with the motorcycle , on the trip i asked my mother , "why are we all of a sudden dental specialists" ? replied my mother "the mother would clean the reefs in the mother's teeth" .
arriving there we go directly to her doctor's office , then suddenly - i was forced to come up to the chair of practice , i was puzzled and quiet , and then i asked the doctor , why me ? my mother replied "hahaha...actually wast to clean his teeth now you , i feel cornered and inevitably i have to obey .
after completion of the clean , my mount feels very fresh and teeth feel rought . although intially i was scared but i feel the result , i feel happy and maybe i will not feel afraid that one day had to come back here .
Aprida Noer Amalia
BalasHapusXII IPS 4
MY VACATION
Yesterday i and my family, holiday in pacitan east java. After a few days, I was bored and finally decided to go to the beach Teleng Ria. I went there along with my cousin. because the distance is not far enough away so we decided to use the bike. We rode our bikes to teleng ria beach, which is only two kilometres from where i live. When we arrived at the beach, we were surprised to see there was hardly anyone there . After a playing in the beach, which was really cold , not one people there.
after we picked some coconuts on the beach, we road our bikes down the beach for a while, on the sand and before we knew it ,we were many walk down the beach. Before we made the long trip back, we decided to wash our feet in the water for a while, and then sit down for a rest.
While we were sitting on the beach, just blather , it suddenly did not realize that we have to go home, day is geting dark. When we finally back to home, we totally exhausted ! But we learned some good lessons and please.
Nurlailah
BalasHapusXII IPS 4
Silent Love
Once, there was a couple who love very much each other. From the very Begining, the girl's family objected strongly on her dating this guy. Saying that it has got to do with family background & that the girl will have to suffer for the rest of her life if she were to be with him.
Due to family's pressure, the couple quarrel very often. Though the girl love the guy deeply, but she always ask him: "How deep is your love for me?"
As the guy is not good with his words, this often cause the girl to be very upset. With that & the family's pressure, the girl often vent her anger on him. As for him, he only endure it in silence.
After a couple of years, the guy finally graduated & decided to further his studies in overseas. Before leaving, he proposed to the girl: "I'm not very good with words. But all I know is that I love you. If you allow me, I will take care of you for the rest of my life. As for your family, I'll try my best to talk them round. Will you marry me?"
The girl agreed, & with the guy's determination, the family finally gave in & agreed to let them get married. So before he leave, they got engaged.
The girl went out to the working society, whereas the guy was overseas, continuing his studies. They sent their love through emails & phone calls. Though it's hard, but both never thought of giving up.
One day, while the girl was on her way to work, she was knocked down by a car that lost control. When she woke up, she saw her parents beside her bed. She realised that she was badly injured. Seeing her mum crying, she wanted to comfort her. But she realized that all that could come out of her mouth was just a sigh. She has lost her voice......
The doctors says that the impact on her brain has caused her to lose her voice. Listening to her parents' comfort, but with nothing coming out from her, she broke down.
During the stay in hospital, besides silence cry,.....it's still just silence cry that companied her. Upon reaching home, everything seems to be the same. Except for the ringing tone of the phone. Which pierced into her heart everytime it rang. She does not wish to let the guy know. & not wanting to be a burden to him, she wrote a letter to him saying that she does not wish to wait any longer.
With that, she sent the ring back to him. In return, the guy sent millions & millions of reply, and countless of phonecalls,.. all the girl could do, besides crying, is still crying....
The parents decided to move away, hoping that she could eventually forget everything & be happy.
With a new environment, the girl learn sign language & started a new life. Telling herself everyday that she must forget the guy. One day, her friend came & told her that he's back. She asked her friend not to let him know what happened to her. Since then, there wasn't anymore news of him.
A year has passed & her friend came with an envelope, containing an invitation card for the guy's wedding. The girl was shattered. When she open the letter, she saw her name in it instead.
When she was about to ask her friend what's going on, she saw the guy standing in front of her. He used sign language telling her "I've spent a year's time to learn sign language. Just to let you know that I've not forgotten our promise. Let me have the chance to be your voice. I Love You. With that, he slipped the ring back into her finger. The girl finally smiled.
SUKO RILO UTOMO
BalasHapusXII IPS 4
The Little Jackal and The Alligator
The little Jackal was very fond of shell-fish. He used to go down by the river and hunt along the edges for crabs and such things. And once, when he was hunting for crabs, he was so hungry that he put his paw into the water after a crab without looking first, — which you never should do! The minute he put in his paw, snap ! — the big Alligator who lives in the mud down there had it in his jaws.
“Oh, dear!” thought the little Jackal; “the big Alligator has my paw in his mouth! In another minute he will pull me down and gobble me up! What shall I do? what shall I do?” Then he thought, suddenly, “I’ll deceive him!”
So he put on a very cheerful voice, as if nothing at all were the matter, and he said, –
“Ho! ho! Clever Mr. Alligator! Smart Mr. Alligator, to take that old bulrush root for my paw! I hope you’ll find it very tender!”
The old Alligator was hidden away beneath the mud and bulrush leaves, and he couldn’t see any thing. He thought, “Pshaw ! I’ve made a mistake.” So he opened his mouth and let the little Jackal go.
The little Jackal ran away as fast as he could, and as he ran he called out, –
“Thank you, Mr. Alligator! Kind Mr. Alligator! So kind of you to let me go!”
The old Alligator lashed with his tail and snapped with his jaws, but it was too late; the little Jackal was out of reach.
After this the little Jackal kept away from the river, out of danger. But after about a week he got such an appetite for crabs that nothing else would do at all; he felt that he must have a crab. So he went down by the river and looked all around, very carefully. He didn’t see the old Alligator, but he thought to himself, “I think I’ll not take any chances.” So he stood still and began to talk out loud to himself. He said, –
“When I don’t see any little crabs on the land I most generally see them sticking out of the water, and then I put my paw in and catch them. I won der if there are any fat little crabs in the water to-day?”
The old Alligator was hidden down in the mud at the bottom of the river, and when he heard what the little Jackal said, he thought, “Aha! I’ll pretend to be a little crab, and when he puts his paw in, I’ll make my dinner of him.” So he stuck the black end of his snout above the water and waited.
The little Jackal took one look, and then he said, — “Thank you, Mr. Alligator! Kind Mr. Alligator! You are exceedingly kind to show me where you are! I will have dinner elsewhere.” And he ran away like the wind.
YUANITA IZZAH
BalasHapusX.3
Once upon a time, on the north coast of Sumatra lived a poor woman and his son. The boy was called Malin Kundang. They didn’t earn much as fishing was their only source of income. “Mother, what if I sail overseas?” asked Malin Kundang one day to his mother. Her mother didn’t agree but Malin Kundang had made up his mind. “Mother, if I stay here, I’ll always be a poor man. I want to be a successful person,” urged Malin kundang. His mother wiped her tears, “If you really want to go, I can’t stop you. I could only pray to God for you to gain success in life,” said his mother wisely. “But, promise me, you’ll come home.”
In the next morning, Malin Kundang was ready to go. Three days ago, he met one of the successful ship’s crew. Malin was offered to join him. “
It had been three months since Malin Kundang left his mother. She wished to see the ship that brought Malin kundang home. Every day and night, she prayed to the God for her son’s safety.she kept waiting and praying for him.
After several years waiting without any news, Malin Kundang’s mother was suddenly surprised by the arrival of a big ship in the pier where she usually stood to wait for her son. When the ship finally pulled over, Malin Kundang’s mother saw a man who looked wealthy stepping down a ladder along with a beautiful woman. She recognized him. The man was Malin Kundang, her son.
Malin Kundang’s mother quickly went to see her beloved son. “Malin, you’re back, son!” said Malin Kundang’s mother and without hesitation, she came running to hug Malin Kundang, “I miss you so much.” But, Malin Kundang didn’t show any respond. He was ashamed to admit his own mother in front of his beautiful wife. “You’re not my Mother. I don’t know you. My mother would never wear such ragged and ugly clothes,” said Malin Kundang as he release his mother embrace.
Malin Kundang’s mother take a step back, “Malin…You don’t recognize me? I’m your mother!” she said sadly. Malin Kundang’s face was as cold as ice. “Guard, take this old women out of here,” Malin Kundang ordered his bodyguard. “Give her some money so she won’t disturb me again!” Malin Kundang’s mother cried as she was dragged by the bodyguard, ”Malin... my son. Why do you treat your own mother like this?”
Malin Kundang ignored his mother and ordered the ship crews to set sail. Malin Kundang’s mother sat alone in the pier. Her heart was so hurt, she cried and cried. “Dear God, if he isn’t my son, please let him have a save journey. But if he is, I cursed him to become a stone,” she prayed to the God.
In the quiet sea, suddenly the wind blew so hard and a thunderstorm came. Malin Kundang’s huge ship was wrecked. He was thrown by the wave out of his ship, and fell on a small island. Suddenly, his whole body turned into stone. He was punished for not admitting his own mother.
KADEK GUSDWI
BalasHapusX3
JGP
one week ago I was with my friends go to the gas pipeline (JPG) MTB bike there we played I was very happy to play there because the course is very challenging and exciting, there's a track called couster road roller is quite challenging because we are going down the cliff 6/7m height down and straight up to the top again. besides roller couster many tracks that I've been through, I can not tell one by one because so many tracks there. I also often fall because the road was slippery because the track is made naturally without human intervention, and therefore I have never come to JPG if it is raining because the streets are very slippery and muddy